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Jackie's avatar

I have no words to describe, "how do YOU find the words" to write what you do. Brilliant!

Gerard DiLeo's avatar

Every phrase is a poem.

Caro Henry's avatar

Thank you, Gerard!

Sharon Hudson's avatar

Despair, heavy as wet wool on her shoulders. Been there, and I can’t think of a more perfect metaphor. This poem is full of images and feelings that weave together, creating clear images of the senses. Exceptional!

Caro Henry's avatar

Thanks, Sharon!

Andi Sinkovics's avatar

Great poem! I hope there's a continuation of it in the future.