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Scott MacLeod's avatar

Nailed it like I knew you would!

Feasts and Fables's avatar

Too kind, Scott. Really glad it hit the spot for you. ✍️

Jim Melvin's avatar

This was a great read—dark, vivid, and full of tension. I really liked how the atmosphere built slowly, especially the scenes in the asylum. The twist at the end caught me off guard in the best way. Nicely done.

Feasts and Fables's avatar

Jim, thanks so much for the kind encouragement. I do love a twist in the tale!