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Scott MacLeod's avatar

Excellent as usual. Here is what I did.

Hide in Plain Sight

Dad had his nose in his phone. It was work of course, ostensibly, but any tracker would show he consumed a liberal dose of ESPN not to mention the gyrating instagram models. Mom was on the face of it more engaged but mostly tending to the basket of snakes hissing and eating their own tails inside her head. They had not left the child; in fact, she was never out of eyesight. But she was abandoned in every sense, as much as if they had dropped her in a basket with a note at the back door to the firehouse.

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Caro Henry's avatar

Good one! This is a horror story that very effectively speaks about emotional abandonment.

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Scott MacLeod's avatar

Thx felt like going heavy on this one

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