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Pages After Dark's avatar

Your writing got me from the first few lines. Your descriptions are beautiful and lyrical. Honestly great writing and an engaging read. Keep writing, fellow writer!

Caro Henry's avatar

Thank you! I had to subscribe to your Substack after reading a great story and a poem that you'd written.

🌸 Carolyn Jones 🌸's avatar

I love this Caro - so well written. I would want to be a bird 🐦 that freedom 🌸

Caro Henry's avatar

Thanks, Carolyn! As a child, I had a recurring dream that I could fly; not as a bird, but as myself. I swam through the air.