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Jim Melvin's avatar

This is very cool with flawless description, but I have to admit that I feel bad for Lyra.

Caro Henry's avatar

Part of the story I didn't share includes Lyra's background of her time on the dark side. More details to follow.

Leanne Shawler's avatar

Enjoyed this. Also felt bad for Lyra as it seems she was an old friend/rival (don’t mind me I’m finally watching “Good Omens”, season 2). Would love to see some more longer fiction from you!

Caro Henry's avatar

Thank you, Leanne. I have more to come on Lyra and Aria in a longer format.

Leanne Shawler's avatar

Yay! Looking forward to it!

Daniel O’Donnell's avatar

Brilliantly done, Caro

Looking forward to reading more about these characters 👍🏼

Caro Henry's avatar

Thank you, Dan! I have some reviewing and rewriting to do. Yikes!

Daniel O’Donnell's avatar

Good luck 😁

By the way, Paved Paradise has inspired me to write a Pelecanos type short story which I’m publishing next week hopefully 👍🏼

Caro Henry's avatar

Ooh! Looking forward to it.