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This is very cool with flawless description, but I have to admit that I feel bad for Lyra.

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Part of the story I didn't share includes Lyra's background of her time on the dark side. More details to follow.

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Enjoyed this. Also felt bad for Lyra as it seems she was an old friend/rival (don’t mind me I’m finally watching “Good Omens”, season 2). Would love to see some more longer fiction from you!

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Thank you, Leanne. I have more to come on Lyra and Aria in a longer format.

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Yay! Looking forward to it!

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Brilliantly done, Caro

Looking forward to reading more about these characters 👍🏼

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Thank you, Dan! I have some reviewing and rewriting to do. Yikes!

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Good luck 😁

By the way, Paved Paradise has inspired me to write a Pelecanos type short story which I’m publishing next week hopefully 👍🏼

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Ooh! Looking forward to it.

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