Brown Girl in the Ring

[David Perlmutter]

Man, me barely understand dis Jamaican dialect...but the story is still very engaging.

[Dale Mahfood]

You did a good job of writing it in your comment. 🇯🇲

[David Perlmutter]

I guess it pays to be a reggae fan…

[Dale Mahfood]

Caro, thanks for the opportunity to contribute to your publication.

[Caro Henry]

Seen! (I don't know if that's still a thing to say.) Anyway, you're most welcome!

[Dale Mahfood]

In my day was, so I receive it. =)

[Lynda R Edwards]

Wow. Love this story. Thanks for sharing.

[Dale Mahfood]

Thanks, Lynda! You’re quite a good Caribbean storyteller yourself!

[Lausanne Davis Carpenter]

Dale, That was engrossing! Whew!

[Dale Mahfood]

Thanks Lausanne. Your response sounds like the story gave you a gym workout. LOL!

[Lausanne Davis Carpenter]

I was definitely nibbling on my thumbnail! LOL!

[Jim Melvin]

Wow, what a great story! I enjoyed every word.

[Dale Mahfood]

Thanks Jim!